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So I thought you’d be the one to make me go crazy;
A subtle twinge of anxiety towards a hopeless act of vandalism.

Street corners are paved with gold
Alongside the hustle and bustle of street racers,
                                 Racing to be caught.

The lingering smells of street side cafés
Hold the attention of little ones as they sprint
                                Towards the prize

I thought you’d be the one to make me into
                A mess of love

The balloons float toward the ongoing sky
The attention is flying higher toward the deep,
                                                Ever deepening blue

That twinge of excitement held my eyes,
For I thought you’d be the one

One, two, three
Three more jumps and the double dutch girls
Find a new game

Notes fly amongst the wind
People dance the streets;
                                Minds fill with nostalgia.

So I thought you’d be the one to make me linger
Towards a subtle drop of hope…

City streets mend a broken heart.
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Author's Comments

As promised, here's a new poem. I haven't had any time to write lately so I don't know what this is gonna sound like to you guys. I'm just glad somethin finally came to me =)

Oh yea, and I made that preview pic for all my poems.

person:

the gun and rose, I totally forgot where i got it...please forgive me. If you recognize it...please tell me so I can give you guys proper credit.

guitar: google

lyrics: Taking Back Sunday =) I heart them so.

hope you enjoy ^.^

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:iconbroken-i-cry:
hey kool person you ARE gettin good with that there photoshop!! awesome work with the pic! the poem struck a note in my brain it was awesome ur writing is like just so like tottally like just awesome b wonderful.

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In order to attain, something of equal value must be lost, this is life's one and only truth...


~Put me back together, or separate the skins from bones, leave me all the pieces then you can leave me alone~
:icononly-wishful-thinkin:
lol thank ya muchly =D

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There's to much beauty in this world to quit. Tell him that. There's just to much goddamn beauty.

-Stay
:iconjustb:
just the right amount of hesitation combined with a powerful internal urge to shout "go!" makes this poem move around like a warm breeze on a beach dune.

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And thus the native hue of resolution
Is sicklied o'er with the pale cast of thought.
:icononly-wishful-thinkin:
:aww: you are to kind. even your comments are poetic. thanks so much

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There's to much beauty in this world to quit. Tell him that. There's just to much goddamn beauty.

-Stay
:iconlesseroflindsey:
hey hey
you did a very good job here.
it is an honor to know that I have talked to this girl on the tele.
yes.
but seriously, i think you are a great writer. I would go into detail on here, but I am not at home so I feel bad for writing here.
haha
okay bye.

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I will write you like a book.
:icononly-wishful-thinkin:
you are an awesome writer as well =) and we should talk again. that was fun ^.^

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There's to much beauty in this world to quit. Tell him that. There's just to much goddamn beauty.

-Stay
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Wow, I like it so much! It's great :-) Thanks for using me :hug:
:icononly-wishful-thinkin:
=D thank ya muchly...and thank you for taking that wonderful pic for me to use :aww:

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There's to much beauty in this world to quit. Tell him that. There's just to much goddamn beauty.

-Stay
:iconjackleaf:
That's good! Strange in it own ways, but very entertaining.

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Purrr.
:icononly-wishful-thinkin:
thank ya muchly :aww:

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There's to much beauty in this world to quit. Tell him that. There's just to much goddamn beauty.

-Stay

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